seeing as how something similar to this happens to me on a monthly basis, it's very touching. one thing i don't get though is why the kid doesn't fight back with his fists. i'd go more into detail on the similarities on this and what happens to me but i don't wanna sound like i'm bitching. anywho, only things i could mention that need improvement are the graphics, which i guess they've been improved by now so my rating on this are:
emotionally touching - 9/10
voice acting - N/A
graphics - 6.5/10
storyline - 9/10
total - 8/10
I really enjoyed this flash
This is an amazing flash video, and song. It's really creative, fresh, and very appealing to the eyes/ears. I really like your drawing style, it shows talent and has that 'laid-back feeling' to it. Another thing I also noticed that was good, is that you added a 'cast' in a sense, of the characters used in this. Also I noticed that there were no scenes (that I could tell) that were 'choppy'. I rate this 10/10, and 5/5 for those reasons.
pretty good flash... reminds me of my friend that killed himself =/
oh yeah and there might be a glitch or somethin cuz i hit replay like 20 times but didn't work
Yeah sorry bud, the button is fixed now. Also sorry for the memory =(
that waz awesome man, lulz family guy...
that old woman basically killed everyone in the mall lulz
lolz speed racer nice flash man...lulz... 5/5 everyday and 10/10 for my review... ill try to help ya get frontpage for this
now this is a pretty damn good flash, even with my stanards (they're high, like The-Super-Flash-Bros worthy) great storyline
that was pretty good for ur first flash, most people cant even add sound but u added a whole song... and made it exactly perfect...5/5, 10/10
It wasnt my first animation it was my first flash music video. but thank you anyways
and sandbag doesnt even get a bruise... now that was a beating lol
but we might have some in by February.
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