pretty good.
seeing as how something similar to this happens to me on a monthly basis, it's very touching. one thing i don't get though is why the kid doesn't fight back with his fists. i'd go more into detail on the similarities on this and what happens to me but i don't wanna sound like i'm bitching. anywho, only things i could mention that need improvement are the graphics, which i guess they've been improved by now so my rating on this are:
emotionally touching - 9/10
voice acting - N/A
graphics - 6.5/10
storyline - 9/10
total - 8/10